Cassette tape reminiscent of season 1 |
Clay's breakdown was one major plot line. The other was the parents of Evergreen (is that the name of the town?) spying on their kids and being responsible for the instigation of the school's ridiculously hardcore security measures. I didn't feel strongly about this storyline but did think it deeply unethical for the parents to spy on their offspring to the extent that they did.
The storylines of seasons 1, 2 and 3 rely largely on the use of flashbacks. This was done well in season 1 - the only season based on a book. The flashbacks in season 2 caused the story to become ridiculously convoluted and undermined much of what went on in season 1.
Season 4 was the only one not to use flashbacks. Clay's visits to his psychiatrist constituted one of the alternatives to flashbacks. The other alternative was the Ghostly Visitations. Clay sees and interacts with Monty, Bryce and (deceased) Justin over the course of the season - even Hannah makes a final ghostly appearance despite her having bid farewell to Clay at her funeral in season 2! OK, so Clay is having a mental breakdown and it's manifesting in his seeing ghosts. BUT other characters see the ghosts too! Alex, Jessica and Winston all see and have complex interactions with one ghost or other, which implies that they really aren't just in anyone's imagination - they are real. Here are my issues with the ghostly visitations:
- The ghosts undermine the character development that took place in earlier seasons. Ghost Bryce in season 4 is as much of an asshole as living Bryce is in seasons 1 and 2. In season 3 we see a more sympathetic side to him, so why does he revert to his former nasty self as a ghost in season 4? Surely his redemption was the whole point of season 3?
- One of the main criticisms of season 1 from suicide prevention groups was that it gave teenagers the impression that it was possible to carry on actively influencing other people and situations after death. The show obviously never took that criticism to heart because season 4 is riddled with dead characters influencing people. In the 13 Reasons Why universe, no-one ever dies dies until they have completed all possible unfinished business to their satisfaction.
- And in case anyone responds to the above by saying 'but the ghosts are just in their heads!', then why do the same versions of the ghosts appear in more than one person's imagination?! Nasty Ghost Bryce appears to Clay, Alex and Jessica.
The last two episodes are incredibly and unnecessarily slow-moving. In episode 9 we are treated to numerous depressing montages of visitors entering and exiting and sitting in the hospital waiting room to be near Justin in his final days. Episode 10 takes us through their graduation ceremony in what feels like real-time. There were two natural endings in episode 10: one after Alex and Winston's conversation and the other during the post-graduation-ceremony drinks, when the camera focuses on Clay's face, which wears an expression of acceptance and understanding. But no, we have to go through more ghostly visitations and the ceremonial burying of the tapes etc.
Despite the convoluted nature of the second, third and fourth seasons of 13 Reasons Why, I've mostly enjoyed them, although for reasons of artistic integrity I firmly believe they should have stuck to one season - the one based on the book. I've found all the seasons compelling (season 2 probably the least so), and have felt genuinely invested in the characters - particularly Justin and Jessica. That said, in season 4, I found the last two episodes so dreary and drawn-out that they put me off the whole season to some extent.
And I don't think Justin should have died. It was as though the writers realised that the 'reveals' of Clay as Ginny Weasley and the parents as massive snoops weren't powerful enough, so they had to shoehorn something else in. Why not give us a scare with Justin rather than kill him off? His brush with death could still have had the effect of bringing the other characters closer together.